AI art "Mega Tokyo 2032 AD File 1: The Body from Pier 17 Part 1" with user description "Case File 1: The Body from Pier 17 Part 1
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The Chief and Officer Romanova have already held me up enough. After a few minutes, I reach the Homicide Division office. As I step through the door, the room is illuminated by holographic monitors. There's a flurry of activity, and in the middle of it all stands a man. That must be Captain Tanaka. Despite everything, he notices me as I approach.

Captain Tanaka: Detective Amano! I don't know how punctuality was in your old unit. Here, you're expected to be present at the start of your shift. Is that clear?

Well, great, I've ruined my first impression. I stand at attention and salute.

Hana: Yes, sir, it won't happen again!
Captain Tanaka: Good! You don't need to salute; we're not a military unit. I know the Chief summoned you this morning, and I don't have time to reprimand you. So, what do you know about last night's Aqua City incident?
Hana: Aqua City is the port of Tinsel City. From what I've heard in the media, half of it was destroyed by a malfunctioning USSD laser satellite.
Captain Tanaka: Well informed. I see why the Chief thinks so highly of you. There are more victims than officers. I'm afraid I'll have to assign you a case on your own. Pier 17, male victim, he appears to have drowned. Find out if there were any outside influences. Take a vehicle from the underground parking garage and head out. Understood?
Hana: Yes, sir.

He nods at me and turns his attention to one of the holograms. As I leave the room, I hear him call out, "Take care, Detective." The door closes, and I set off. The traffic is hell, and it takes longer than I expected. I finally arrive, and when I see the extent of the damage, I'm relieved. The satellite could easily have wiped out the entire city. Pier 17, right? I'd better ask one of the officers here for directions. After questioning someone about the way, I have a rough idea of where to find him. I grab my gear and head out. When I arrive at Pier 17, I see two plainclothes officers, one muscular and the other more athletic. I decide to ask them about the body.

Hana: Um, excuse me, gentlemen, can you help me? I'm looking for the body from Pier 17.
???: Gentlemen? Did you hear that, Daley? Now that's good manners.
Daley: How lucky she doesn't know you that well, Leon. This is Detective McNichol, and I'm Detective Wong. We're with the Anti-Boomer Unit. Feel free to call us by our first names.
Hana: Okay, my name is Hana, Homicide Division. Anti-Boomer Unit. I thought this was a USSD accident?
Leon: We're just helping out because we're short-staffed…

They seem to have noticed my arms, or at least they're staring at them. I decide to break the silence.

Hana: That's a long story, but I have to find a body.
Daley: Ah, it's over there. According to his ID, his name was Jonathan Drake.

I head in the direction Daley points and see it right away. It's lying on the ground, wearing an orange jumpsuit, its head tilted to the right. I turn my head to get a better look at its face. Then a flashback hits me. I go pale, my eyes widen, and my mouth moves silently. Even if I wanted to... I couldn't forget that face… The man... who... shattered my arms... lies dead at my feet. A hand grabs my shoulder and pulls me back to the present.

Daley: Hana? Hana, can you hear me? Are you okay?
Hana: Ah, I'm okay now. I wasn't prepared for this sight; it's my first day.

No, I'm not okay… I'm lying to them, I hope they didn't notice too much.

Leon: I understand. Do you need anything?
Hana: Give me a few minutes.

Leon com calls, and I'm glad that someone's attention isn't on me anymore. It looks urgent.

Leon: Daley, we have to go. A Boomer has shown up. Hana, can you handle this?
Hana: Sure, I'm a big girl now.
Leon: Okay, let's go, Daley.
Daley: Take care, Hana.

Then they both sprint off, and I can finally collect my thoughts.

You reached the end of this file. Don't forget to close it if you are finished."

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OP22 days ago

Just edit the flashback scene a little bit. I added some space between the words to add hopfuly more wight and depth to it. To point out Hanas shock much more.

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Mega Tokyo 2032 AD File 1: The Body from Pier 17 Part 1

Case File 1: The Body from Pier 17 Part 1 Classified: For Official Use Only The Chief and Officer Romanova have already held me up enough. After a few minutes, I reach the Homicide Division office. As I step through the door, the room is illuminated by holographic monitors. There's a flurry of activity, and in the middle of it all stands a man. That must be Captain Tanaka. Despite everything, he notices me as I approach. Captain Tanaka: Detective Amano! I don't know how punctuality was in your old unit. Here, you're expected to be present at the start of your shift. Is that clear? Well, great, I've ruined my first impression. I stand at attention and salute. Hana: Yes, sir, it won't happen again! Captain Tanaka: Good! You don't need to salute; we're not a military unit. I know the Chief summoned you this morning, and I don't have time to reprimand you. So, what do you know about last night's Aqua City incident? Hana: Aqua City is the port of Tinsel City. From what I've heard in the media, half of it was destroyed by a malfunctioning USSD laser satellite. Captain Tanaka: Well informed. I see why the Chief thinks so highly of you. There are more victims than officers. I'm afraid I'll have to assign you a case on your own. Pier 17, male victim, he appears to have drowned. Find out if there were any outside influences. Take a vehicle from the underground parking garage and head out. Understood? Hana: Yes, sir. He nods at me and turns his attention to one of the holograms. As I leave the room, I hear him call out, "Take care, Detective." The door closes, and I set off. The traffic is hell, and it takes longer than I expected. I finally arrive, and when I see the extent of the damage, I'm relieved. The satellite could easily have wiped out the entire city. Pier 17, right? I'd better ask one of the officers here for directions. After questioning someone about the way, I have a rough idea of where to find him. I grab my gear and head out. When I arrive at Pier 17, I see two plainclothes officers, one muscular and the other more athletic. I decide to ask them about the body. Hana: Um, excuse me, gentlemen, can you help me? I'm looking for the body from Pier 17. ???: Gentlemen? Did you hear that, Daley? Now that's good manners. Daley: How lucky she doesn't know you that well, Leon. This is Detective McNichol, and I'm Detective Wong. We're with the Anti-Boomer Unit. Feel free to call us by our first names. Hana: Okay, my name is Hana, Homicide Division. Anti-Boomer Unit. I thought this was a USSD accident? Leon: We're just helping out because we're short-staffed… They seem to have noticed my arms, or at least they're staring at them. I decide to break the silence. Hana: That's a long story, but I have to find a body. Daley: Ah, it's over there. According to his ID, his name was Jonathan Drake. I head in the direction Daley points and see it right away. It's lying on the ground, wearing an orange jumpsuit, its head tilted to the right. I turn my head to get a better look at its face. Then a flashback hits me. I go pale, my eyes widen, and my mouth moves silently. Even if I wanted to... I couldn't forget that face… The man... who... shattered my arms... lies dead at my feet. A hand grabs my shoulder and pulls me back to the present. Daley: Hana? Hana, can you hear me? Are you okay? Hana: Ah, I'm okay now. I wasn't prepared for this sight; it's my first day. No, I'm not okay… I'm lying to them, I hope they didn't notice too much. Leon: I understand. Do you need anything? Hana: Give me a few minutes. Leon com calls, and I'm glad that someone's attention isn't on me anymore. It looks urgent. Leon: Daley, we have to go. A Boomer has shown up. Hana, can you handle this? Hana: Sure, I'm a big girl now. Leon: Okay, let's go, Daley. Daley: Take care, Hana. Then they both sprint off, and I can finally collect my thoughts. You reached the end of this file. Don't forget to close it if you are finished.

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Amanatsu (Illustrious)

V1.1

Extensiones

Smooth Detailer Booster (NoobAI/Illustrious/Pony)

Smooth Booster v3

0.4

Cryosibilum Style | Illustrious

CRYOSv3.0

0.4

Semilla

50294464

Pasos

Escala CFG

Sampler

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