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about 18 hours ago

cool story!

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Eris - Battle in the Shadows

Eris - The Battle in the Castle Eris Greyrat advanced with determined and silent steps through the dark corridors of the ancient castle, her sword drawn and held firmly in her right hand. Her amber eyes carefully scanned every shadow. Suddenly, a hooded man emerged from the darkness. Without hesitation, Eris launched herself into the attack. The clash was fierce: blades colliding with force, sparks illuminating the corridor, fast and precise movements. Eris fought with her usual ferocity, dodging and counterattacking with power. After an intense exchange of blows, Eris prevailed. With a decisive slash, she disarmed her opponent, sending his sword flying. The man fell to the ground defeated. Eris lowered her sword slightly, breathing heavily but with a small satisfied smile on her face as she looked down at her fallen enemy. However, at that very moment, a cold shiver ran down her spine... ----- I decided to share only this part of the fight, which I didn’t think was too bad. (definitely improvable since I want a more realistic Anime fight, but as always, these are test after test). ----- If you would like feel free to drop impressions and suggestions on what you think or how to improve it.